Salem Gallows OoC Thread for Witch Hunt
#1
Posted 21 November 2005 - 01:39 PM
*Unless it's Avatara, of course."
-- From the memoirs of Sundered Angel
#4
Posted 21 November 2005 - 10:46 PM
*Unless it's Avatara, of course."
-- From the memoirs of Sundered Angel
#5
Posted 22 November 2005 - 12:22 AM
*Unless it's Avatara, of course."
-- From the memoirs of Sundered Angel
#6
Posted 22 November 2005 - 08:43 AM
#7
Posted 22 November 2005 - 08:56 AM
Lindus - Headmaster of the Magisterium - Lindus operates the magisterium. He decides who should recieve training, and can train you in mana and casting himself. The students feel that he is a decent guy.
Pheres - Healing instructor - Pheres a master of healing magic. If you ask he can train you. The students know him as friendly. He needs a harpy egg for a project he is working on.
Tros - Runes instructor
Palaestra - Alchemy instructor - Palaestra is a master of Alchemy. She can teach it to you, if you ask. She is known by the students as not being the friendliest, but knowing alchemy well. She may one day be surpassed by Charax.
Selinus - Librarian - Selinus knows every book in the Magisterium. He is very old. If you bring him the Sapphire Books of Wisdom, he can give you the passwords to the higher degree magic halls.
Helen - Owns and operates the study hall - Helen serves mediocre food. Her Dodona cousins run most of the inns in Cythera. She is married to Paris. Since she and Paris have common cousins, it goes to reason that either they are (uggh) cousins or (UGGH!!) siblings. She is the mother of Niobe.
Paris - Shop operator - Paris sells some good equipment. Torchs are a good source of light, and bags can hold 80 grains without increasing their own weight. He is married to Helen and is the father of Niobe. His Dodona cousins run most of the inns in Cythera.
Niobe - Helping her mother - Niobe had a weird dream involving you. She is the daughter of Helen and Paris.
Clytemnestra - Runes student - Clytemnestra is about to graduate and become a freemage.
Peisander - Undecided student - Peisander is the newest student.
Danae - Healing student - Danae is just another student.
Menelaus - Alchemy student - Menelaus is just another student.
Protesilaus - Healing student - Protesilaus is just another student.
Alcyone - Student - Alcyone is just another student.
Thrasymedes - Healing student - Thrasymedes is just another student.
Peleus - Runes student - Peleus is just another student.
Lycaon - Undecided student - Lycaon is just another student.
Semele - Student - Semele hopes to become a researcher.
#8
Posted 22 November 2005 - 06:45 PM
This post has been edited by Selax: 22 November 2005 - 06:46 PM
#9
Posted 23 November 2005 - 12:49 PM
I think I'll ditch the Overmind account, I keep forgetting to switch logins. It's a bit pointless using multiple accounts without the karma system, anyway.
#10
Posted 23 November 2005 - 01:12 PM
Sideline will be saved as soon as I find where it split to...done.
This post has been edited by Avatara: 24 November 2005 - 02:05 AM
*Unless it's Avatara, of course."
-- From the memoirs of Sundered Angel
#11
Posted 23 November 2005 - 03:08 PM
#13
Posted 23 November 2005 - 06:15 PM
#14
Posted 25 November 2005 - 07:38 PM
This post has been edited by cache22: 26 November 2005 - 04:37 AM
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Posted 28 November 2005 - 09:25 PM
#16
Posted 30 November 2005 - 09:01 PM
#18
Posted 01 December 2005 - 01:55 AM
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#20
Posted 01 December 2005 - 03:05 AM
This post has been edited by cache22: 01 December 2005 - 03:06 AM
#22
Posted 03 December 2005 - 02:14 AM
kentonis said:
I have noticed, though, that your posts could be a little more rounded, for lack of a better word. For example, in your first paragraph of this post, you had the Scribe and the messenger find a body. OK, that's fine, but how would they react to that? And how could you go about showing us their reactions? That kind of thing that adds some depth to the storytelling, and fills out the characters a little.
Same thing when the two young mages find the body of the master. Now, I'm assuming they're the same two I used in dealing with the magical plant, so they're completely unimportant and you can do what you like with them. Actually, using them is a nice touch, as it adds a little continuity between posts.
If it were me, I'd probably do something like this:
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"Is that -" one began.
"I think so..." the other responded.
"Urrrgh!" the first one said.
"Right on my shoe," the second one sighed, and immediately regretted it. He clapped his hand over his mouth in a barely successful attempt to avoid mimicing his friend.
"We better tell someone," the second resumed, once he felt he could risk opening his mouth.
The first one nodded, still holding his mouth. They ran, as best they could, to tell the masters what had happened.
That's just me, though, and it's in keeping with the way I was using those characters as a bit of light comic relief. That might not be the effect you want, so you'd do something different.
If you do decide to expand your post a bit, I look forward to seeing what you come up with (i.e. don't just use what I wrote. )
This post has been edited by cache22: 03 December 2005 - 02:17 AM
#23
Posted 03 December 2005 - 03:55 PM
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Kentonis, I think that days is too much time; several hours would probably work better. Other than that, I think both posts look okay.
#24
Posted 05 December 2005 - 05:21 PM
#25
Posted 05 December 2005 - 05:59 PM
*Unless it's Avatara, of course."
-- From the memoirs of Sundered Angel