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#26 LifeKnight

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Posted 16 December 2003 - 01:22 PM

Dawn tore away from ZeroWing, and ran on. She realized suddenly that the direction she was running was not north, but straight out of Kosha to the west. She soon came to small, and in middle of the lake, there was a sandy island.

OOC: It's too tough to make it one sentence. How about two? Posted Image

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#27 Avatara

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Posted 16 December 2003 - 06:06 PM

(that's twice you've done three sentences, you fail Posted Image

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On this small sandy island lived a hobo and his pet rock Wilson.

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#28 Brigand Warrior

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Posted 16 December 2003 - 07:18 PM

(may I request we post two sentences?)

That was when Dawn realized that she was also intruding in this story the way CATS did in hers, but as soon as she went back into her own world, she saw the guard turn into the form of Dawn and slaughter Arethous of the Roasted Haunch.

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Posted 17 December 2003 - 03:21 AM

Dawn ran away into an empty room where she touched something and she fell down.
She fell into an alchemicial lab and when she tried to stand up, she couldn't go up.

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#30 Brigand Warrior

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Posted 17 December 2003 - 02:11 PM

But then that was when Dawn woke up from a daydream, and she crouched down to see if Arethous of the roasted haunch was still alive.

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Posted 17 December 2003 - 08:21 PM

He wasn't.

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#32 Avatara

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Posted 17 December 2003 - 08:33 PM

The Dawn-fake kicked the dead body away before she turned herself into the form of a man, one who looked strikingly similar to Dawn.

"I'll bet you thought you had seen the last of me," Nwad laughed.

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Posted 17 December 2003 - 09:58 PM

"Nwad, my antithesis- I was wrong in assuming you were gone, but I'll do away with you yet!" Dawn hissed as she lunged at him.

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#34 Brigand Warrior

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Posted 17 December 2003 - 10:15 PM

(HEY! AVATARA INCLUDED TWO SENTENCES! OUR OWN MODERATOR!)

But Nwad's Brigand Warriors got hold of Dawn, and she couldn't escape their grasp, but that was when more bombs were booming, people were running around screaming, a mage put the landking amulet around arethous, but that was when undead and skeletons rained from the sky, and the guard ran after Nwad as the Brigand Warriors carried her away, and said "Nwad! Stop! I need her! You don't know what is happening!"

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Posted 18 December 2003 - 12:22 AM

Dawn used the last of her magic to escape from Nwad: She casted Directed Nexus, and suddenly she was standing in the LandKing hall.

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#36 bellerophen

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Posted 18 December 2003 - 09:53 AM

" You murderer!" Magpie yelled.
"What have i done" Dawn asked
"I will tell you what you have done"
you done this...........

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#37 Pufer

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 12:21 AM

The memories of past accusations flooded Dawn's mind as she looked upon the huge, empty expanse of LandKing hall. It had been years since Dawn had been there, but it, strangely, felt like home.

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Posted 20 December 2003 - 08:41 AM

Of course, the only reason it felt like home was because Dawn was very clearly mentally disturbed.

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#39 Avatara

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Posted 21 December 2003 - 12:50 PM

Her mental condition had started several years ago, the day she first met him.

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Posted 22 December 2003 - 08:51 AM

tears coming out her eyes. "What happend to my friends?" Suddenly 2 guards came in. The picked up Dawn and took her to Alaric. "Why did you need to kill him."
He shoughted. "Killed who?" Dawn asked. Dwan so mad. She throwed the two guards away. She jumped one Alaric. He fell on the ground. he was knocked out.
She saw a ring on alaric's finger. She took the gold ring and ran away. Somebody shoughted: "Come back Eudoxus". "Eudoxus" she asked herself. "What is going on here?"

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Posted 22 December 2003 - 10:36 PM

Another (multi-sentence) hallucination was what was going on. She needed to find the one named him before she lapsed farther into the oblivion that was her madness.

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Posted 25 December 2003 - 07:02 PM

It wasn't easy to search for anyone, however, when you were as deranged as Dawn was; perhaps if some one cast Rally on her she would be ok for a while.

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Posted 29 December 2003 - 08:16 PM

Unfortunately, none of the mages remembered the "Rally" spell. She had to look for another alternative to overcome her troubles.

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Posted 30 December 2003 - 07:11 PM

"I know!" Dawn exclaimed. "I need lithium- at least they won't stick me in an asylum then."

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Posted 07 June 2006 - 02:36 AM

By this point, Night had settled outside LandKing Hall, and was pulling out a packed lunch.

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Posted 07 June 2006 - 05:25 AM

Turkey sandwich?

I'm going back to the ones that know, with whom I can be what I want to be

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Posted 08 June 2006 - 05:01 PM

*OoC*
Well, this a topic is a little old, but I suppose it is still open for posting...
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Dawn raced out of Land King Hall and collided with the man called Night, ruining his dinner of turkey sandwiches. "YOU!!!" she shouted and lunged at him.

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Posted 08 June 2006 - 10:39 PM

Night was completely taken by surprise as Dawn grabbed his sandwich and swallowed it whole, only to find out she was allergic to turkey.

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Posted 08 June 2006 - 11:41 PM

She was choking and spluttering, her cheeks and neck turninga bright, turkey red.

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Posted 09 June 2006 - 04:51 AM

Night was torn between the urge to save the woman he'd once loved, and his current love for turkey sandwiches. Not to mention she was clearly off her rocker, and the love between them had certainly waned . . .

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