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Sail (Viirelei's Cut 2) a Cythera novel

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Posted 08 May 2015 - 02:24 PM

Just in case there are no May chrons, here's all the scenes from the rest of Sail that have had significant revision.

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Posted 14 May 2015 - 06:03 PM

I finally finished reading the revised version of Sail! ^_^ I really like how the story all comes together! I can't wait to read the rest of it ^_^ I didn't notice any part of the revised version that I didn't like as well as the original version, so I think that says something :D
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Posted 15 May 2015 - 01:21 PM

View PostBreadWorldMercy453, on 14 May 2015 - 06:03 PM, said:

I didn't notice any part of the revised version that I didn't like as well as the original version, so I think that says something :D


I'll take that as good news!
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Posted 25 May 2015 - 01:05 PM

Suriel goes to all that trouble to burn down the shrine and clear real estate land for development and the viirelei act like he's some kind of villain. Such ingratitude :P .
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Posted 25 May 2015 - 01:09 PM

It was already developed! And it's not like there's a shortage of oceanfront property!
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Posted 07 June 2015 - 03:36 PM

It was also old enough to be condemned! Clearly, it was a health hazard, and he was doing them a favor.
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