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SO, I'm doing an overhaul of the entire Sail draft before I write the climax. Mostly it's just line editing, but I've written another chapter that occurs somewhere in the middle of the original chapter 7 as part of my attempt to make Kateiko a more likable character :V (among fixing other issues.)

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This post has been edited by iKaterei: 14 December 2015 - 06:48 AM

Yay, you finished The Missing Chapter! ^_^ It was fun reading about the Sverbian town, and about Kako saving the day. I thought it was interesting that she believes in Suriel, but not kinaru.

Thanks for the bundle of edited chapters! I intend to read those sometime, but I was too impatient to read this chapter :D

I'm starting to think Katerei is a villain in this story. I mean look at how she is trying to foil Suriel's plans in this chapter .

But she's not, really! Suriel's goal is just to get everyone off his front lawn. He doesn't care how that happens. Katerei is actually helping him by making everyone leave.

But she's creating the possibility they might come back! I still say she is acting like a villain .