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Sail: Chapter 23 a Cythera novel
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Posted 24 January 2015 - 12:48 PM
ugh I am so done with this chapter
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Posted 25 January 2015 - 05:07 PM
Wowev, what a twist! Even though you hinted that Fendul would show up in this chapter, I totally didn't expect the whole Rin jouyen to show up! 
And Fendul's cool now?? And he kissed Kako's hair?? Dude! It seems like she could just re-join the Rin, marry Fendul, & live happily-ever-after (or struck-by-war-and-miserably-ever-after), except that I know she's going to end up in the other world, alone :(
I think this chapter was well-done. I can't wait to see if Nili will get to meet Parr ^_^ (if this were Fail instead of Sail, I'm sure she'd try to steal him from Kako)
And Fendul's cool now?? And he kissed Kako's hair?? Dude! It seems like she could just re-join the Rin, marry Fendul, & live happily-ever-after (or struck-by-war-and-miserably-ever-after), except that I know she's going to end up in the other world, alone :(I think this chapter was well-done. I can't wait to see if Nili will get to meet Parr ^_^ (if this were Fail instead of Sail, I'm sure she'd try to steal him from Kako)
I'll become even more undignified than this
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Posted 26 January 2015 - 06:14 AM
BreadWorldMercy453, on 25 January 2015 - 05:07 PM, said:
Dude! It seems like she could just re-join the Rin, marry Fendul, & live happily-ever-after (or struck-by-war-and-miserably-ever-after), except that I know she's going to end up in the other world, alone 
"Sometimes I get confused whether I'm posting on ATT or in the War Room. But then I remind myself: If it's moderators acting scatter-brained and foolish, then it's the War Room*.
*Unless it's Avatara, of course."
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Posted 26 January 2015 - 06:44 AM
BreadWorldMercy453, on 25 January 2015 - 05:07 PM, said:
And Fendul's cool now??
'Cool' might be pushing it.
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It seems like she could just re-join the Rin, marry Fendul, & live happily-ever-after
Well, if you get tired of writing Avriana, that sounds like a good basis for a fanfic...
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I can't wait to see if Nili will get to meet Parr 
(if this were Fail instead of Sail, I'm sure she'd try to steal him from Kako)
(if this were Fail instead of Sail, I'm sure she'd try to steal him from Kako)I don't think Nili's into old guys, but she might try anyway just to boost her ego. :>
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Posted 30 January 2015 - 10:59 PM
Hmm, I wasn't expecting her tribe to move, given their aversion to doing so earlier. I wonder if what they have learned is making them regret that choice or if they have realized that there is no safe place any more.
I think it is a good thing Katerei told somebody. Keeping that sort of thing to herself would probably not have done her any good.
I think it is a good thing Katerei told somebody. Keeping that sort of thing to herself would probably not have done her any good.
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