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Sail: Chapter 11 a Cythera novel

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 01:15 PM

Ah, it's fun writing Iannah again. ^_^

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Posted 07 November 2014 - 06:56 PM

If you enjoy writing Iannah, you could always bring her back into the TS :P .


Another well-done chapter, with an appropriately ominous last line :) . Iannah seems like someone who really wants a friend. It'll be interesting to see how that develops.

Out of curiosity, is Parr intended to be a TS character or game NPC? Or is he a completely original character?
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Posted 07 November 2014 - 11:57 PM

View PostSelax, on 07 November 2014 - 06:56 PM, said:

If you enjoy writing Iannah, you could always bring her back into the TS :P .


I think Avatara has plans to bring her back? Not like he'll ever read this to confirm. :>

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Iannah seems like someone who really wants a friend.


Yeah, she doesn't have a lot of female colleagues and doesn't get much time away from the Colonnium.

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Out of curiosity, is Parr intended to be a TS character or game NPC? Or is he a completely original character?


Completely original. He started out more as a plot device, but I wound up liking him so he's going to have a somewhat larger role. ;)

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 11:48 AM

Nice chapter! Iannah is a likable character, it's kind of sad that she'll end up as an assassin :( I wonder if the transition to assassin will happen in this book? Maybe she'll quit the military if they make a stupid decision regarding Suriel..

I can't imagine why Kateiko undid her hair on a windy beach! ^_^

I look forward to the next chapter, I wonder if K will go back to Tiernan's, if he'll be mad at her, if he'll let her stay, etc.

It's amazing how much writing & art you've done lately! Your novel must be a full-time job!
I'll become even more undignified than this

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Posted 08 November 2014 - 07:49 PM

View PostBreadWorldMercy453, on 08 November 2014 - 11:48 AM, said:

Nice chapter! Iannah is a likable character, it's kind of sad that she'll end up as an assassin :( I wonder if the transition to assassin will happen in this book? Maybe she'll quit the military if they make a stupid decision regarding Suriel..


Who knows? :ph34r:

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I can't imagine why Kateiko undid her hair on a windy beach! ^_^


Because it's preeeetty :D

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It's amazing how much writing & art you've done lately! Your novel must be a full-time job!


It pretty much is a full-time job. Housewifing takes up a lot less time without children.

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