Ares Chronicles: Vi: Conflict Space 1:1

#1 Patrick

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Posted 23 August 2002 - 01:10 AM

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#2 Patrick

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Posted 25 August 2002 - 07:13 PM

enjoy. pt II comes on tuesday, pt III thursday etc. New name is Collision Course.

I'm writing this as an exercise in fiction, so expect more crap before it gets better Posted Image

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#3 Joveia

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Posted 26 August 2002 - 05:37 AM

It looks interesting... a little bit hard to understand at the end though (you need more clearly seperated paraphraphs, foo.)

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Posted 27 August 2002 - 10:37 PM

Bah. A whole week, and my Part 5 chronicle hasn't come up yet.

Great story Patrick, it was very interesting.

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Posted 28 August 2002 - 09:18 AM

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Originally posted by Blood Eagle:
Bah. A whole week, and my Part 5 chronicle hasn't come up yet.

Great story Patrick, it was very interesting.

If you've submitted it you should resubmit: it's not listed on the admin pages for the Ares chronicles.

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