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The night is still young and beautiful. Too sincere for these tired eyes and tortured hearts

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Posted 15 May 2008 - 01:41 AM

n/t
[1:50] anti: " Don't forget the sunglasses, its like a gun on your face"
/Fiesta Grande\

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Posted 15 May 2008 - 03:26 AM

I have been to a new place this night
Where sticks crackle and cars rumble
And crows cry out against the wind

I have seen deer with tails erect
And confronted their fear in my eyes
Confronting my fear in theirs

I have begged forgiveness for their disturbance
And raised my arms to the forest for mercy
With only a goose call in return

I have been besides waters still and violent
As I drifted possessed in the morning light
To the peaceful oblivion and artificial wind
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In the light of morning the sun climbs upon the shoulder of the sky / I yearn for the tender darkness.

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Posted 15 May 2008 - 01:44 PM

Please tell me you wrote that
[1:50] anti: " Don't forget the sunglasses, its like a gun on your face"
/Fiesta Grande\

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Posted 15 May 2008 - 02:38 PM

I did, years ago.
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Posted 15 May 2008 - 09:17 PM

I haven't had one of those long, nights to be alone in awhile. I think it's about time for a few more of those.
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Posted 16 May 2008 - 10:21 AM

View Postmrxak, on May 15 2008, 04:26 AM, said:

I have been to a new place this night
Where sticks crackle and cars rumble
And crows cry out against the wind

I have seen deer with tails erect
And confronted their fear in my eyes
Confronting my fear in theirs

I have begged forgiveness for their disturbance
And raised my arms to the forest for mercy
With only a goose call in return

I have been besides waters still and violent
As I drifted possessed in the morning light
To the peaceful oblivion and artificial wind

Those aren't haikus.
Currently making Possession 2, a game where you play as a ghost and possess your enemies.

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Posted 16 May 2008 - 03:35 PM

Good eye.
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Posted 19 May 2008 - 02:35 AM

Poetic jaunts on webboards are completely inappropriate,
Especially on Trash Talk where the words collide with destiny.
"For a writing to be a writing it must continue to 'act' and to be readable even when what is called the author of the writing no longer answers for what he has written..."

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Posted 01 August 2008 - 02:43 PM

I've been working on a poem about the first cave man to look up at the stars and wonder about them, but I'm having trouble with the mid-part.
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