Ok, how about this as the storyline.
Abbrevations:
EF = Earth's current government
CF x = colonist faction x where x is 1, 2, 3
B = barbarians of CF 2
P = pirates of CF 1 and 3
.gov= government
In the late 21st century, 4 colony ships are launched from Earth. Three survive but the fourth mysteriously disappears. The 3 remaining ships land at the home systems of CF1, CF2, and CF3 and found colonies there. All colonies as well as Earth now develop cloaking technology. This technology now allows a skillful enough captain to escape the prying eyes of the law, and allows for large-scale, organized piracy to be created in the systems of CF1 and CF3. Meanwhile, in CF2, a wealthy and ruthless man buys several dozen military-class ships and forms the B(we need a cool name for them) which proceed to run amok, sacking stations and stealing everything of value. The B slow down their raids however, and increased military forces of CF2 hold an uneasy truce with the B. As long as the B confine their raids to the Outer Rim of the CF2 system, the CF2 navy will not attempt a bloody campaign against the B to eradicate them.
CF3 troops now initiate a campaign against the alien-occupied planet in the CF3 system. The aliens who have a tech level that is about our 2001 level tech, fight back with stolen CF3 tech and manage to kick out CF3. A low-level war between the aliens and CF3 continues through the plug.
Years pass, and all three CFs and EF develop FTL technology almost simultaneously. However the slow, expensive and bulky FTL drive has a more serious flaw -
any carbon-based organism aboard will die a painful death when the device is activated. EF scientists, being the best funded of the bunch, continue work on the drive, hoping to make a breakthrough to counteract it's adverse effects. The CFs abandon work in favor of new, better military tech to fight the P and B. The P of CF1 also continue work with it, and soon discover a modification that allows for near-instantaneous communication far faster than the speed of light. The P of CF1, despite their high organizational status, realise that the CF1 tech is getting better than theirs and eventually the P of CF1 will become outclassed. The P of CF1 deploy FTL probes to all 3 other systems where colony ships had been sent, using their new FTL comm system to control the probes remotely.
The probes discover the B and the CF3 pirates and contact them. The major CF3 pirate organization and the B agree to share tactics and technology with each other, and the CF1 pirates give the CF3 and the B their FTL comm system.
Pirate research is now focusing on a cloaking device that will allow the parent ship to fire and remain cloaked.
Meanwhile, the Miner's Union of CF1 goes on strike due to claimed inadequacies in the defences from P raids.
A detachment of CF1 troops is despatched to the Asteriod Belt to supress the strike.(first missions)
Meanwhile, EF scientists have finally discovered the necessary technology for a workable FTL drive. EF .gov, realising that the Sol system is running out of natural resources, decides a workable solution would be to conquer the colonies and take theirs for the EF .gov. A great fleet is built and launched to the stars, with their first target CF3.
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